Foundation
Combine sentences two ways
Whenshort sentences feel choppy
Take two related sentences. Try two joins: “The bus left. I was still running” becomes “The bus left while I was still running” or “I was still running when the bus left.” Read both; keep the emphasis you want. Separate sentences may still work best.
Start tiny
Join two short sentences once.
Evidence grade AMeta-analysis, evidence-based guideline, or repeated findings
Australian Education Research Organisation (2022), Sentence combining. Read the source ↗ ; Graham & Perin (2007), Writing Next. Read the source ↗ Evidence supports sentence-combining instruction primarily in schools; transfer to independent adult creative writing is uncertain. Examples and duration are editorial.
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